Thanks, Shaz! I've updated and posted here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21698358/GSCordova22iOS.pdf
-becky On Tue, Nov 20, 2012 at 7:01 PM, Shazron <shaz...@gmail.com> wrote: > Thanks Becky! Looks great. > > Some comments: > > 1. Requirements -- we are moving this to a separate section in the docs, > with the GS Guide referring to it. Your section here can be the basis for > that new section. > 2. Download Cordova. All urls should point to > http://docs.cordova.ioinstead of > http://docs.phonegap.com . When the time comes, that .io will re-direct to > an Apache server instead of Adobe's. I know you mention this, but I think > we should not mention PhoneGap in the Apache docs? Right now the downloads > are: http://incubator.apache.org/cordova/#download but once we get the TLP > server location up we would have an updated URL > > > > On Tue, Nov 20, 2012 at 12:53 PM, Becky Gibson <gibson.be...@gmail.com > >wrote: > > > Hmm, attachment must have been stripped by mail system? It's there in my > > sent folder. Here is a Dropbox link: > > https://www.dropbox.com/s/du3cujg8l408ptq/GSCordova22iOSApache.pdf > > > > Becky > > > > Sent from my iPad > > > > On Nov 20, 2012, at 2:20 PM, Shazron <shaz...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > Ditto - it's all open source, open discussion - feel free :) Thanks for > > > doing this, would like to read it once you post it. > > > > > > > > > On Tue, Nov 20, 2012 at 10:59 AM, Filip Maj <f...@adobe.com> wrote: > > > > > >> I don't have a problem with posting to google group. > > >> > > >> Also, there is no attachment :) > > >> > > >> On 11/20/12 7:40 AM, "Becky Gibson" <gibson.be...@gmail.com> wrote: > > >> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> I am taking a technical writing class and needed to produce a 5-10 > page > > >>> technical document. I elected to re-write the Getting Started for > iOS > > >>> Guide (attached). I wrote the document based on a new Mac and/or > Xcode > > >>> user. It may be more detailed than we want > > >>> to publish with Cordova. I'd appreciate feedback on the document and > > >>> would like to post if publicly for feedback via the PhoneGap google > > group > > >>> if that does not pose any problems. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> I searched through the Apple Trademark info > > >>> (http://www.apple.com/legal/trademark/guidelinesfor3rdparties.html) > > and > > >>> believe I have given proper attribution within the document. > > >>> However, the attribution varies when the document is distributed > > >>> outside of the US. I used the United States references but I'm not > > sure > > >>> what the Apache policy is? > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> I also included a copyright notice at the end of the file with the > > Apache > > >>> license. I did set it to copyright 2012 Becky Gibson but can remove > my > > >>> name if that is a problem. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> I'd appreciate any feedback on the document by November 28. Also, is > > >>> something we would consider as part of the Cordova Docs? If so, what > > >>> format or HTML template should I use (it would be tedious to convert > > this > > >>> to markdown but probably not impossible). > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> Please let me know about any concerns posting to the google group. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> thanks, > > >>> -becky > > >> > > >> > > >
