Github user dblotsky commented on the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/cordova-docs/pull/465#issuecomment-175325394
  
    1. In general, should we be using first-person or third-person voice in the 
docs? I realised halfway through the review that some pages use both, and it 
would be better if we stick to one of the two.
    
    2. Do you think some of the paragraphs on this page can be shortened or 
maybe even removed entirely? What information should this page contain, and is 
it currently containing more than that?


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