+1 also, though there’s a single grammar point to address that I noted in the github diff thingy.
B. > On 1 Jul 2019, at 18:01, Paul Davis <paul.joseph.da...@gmail.com> wrote: > > +1 > > Also for others fighting GitHub's side scrolly thing, this article > made review significantly easier: > > https://www.viget.com/articles/dress-up-your-git-diffs-with-word-level-highlights/ > > On Mon, Jul 1, 2019 at 9:55 AM Naomi S <n...@tumbolia.org> wrote: >> >> hello, >> >> I have prepared a pull request that amends the bylaws: >> >> https://github.com/apache/couchdb-www/pull/31 >> >> this PR makes two changes: >> >> - Add explicit <p> elements to fix display issue >> >> - Remove redundant and potentially confusing paragraph about the chair >> >> The first sentence of this paragraph repeats some of the text in the >> previous paragraph. The second sentence covers powers and responsibilities >> shared with the PMC, and stating this in this section runs the risk of >> implying that the chair has special powers, which is not the case. (See § >> 3.8. Decision Types) >> >> - General copyedit for style, grammar, spelling, etc. >> >> - Detab the file and fix some minor HTML formatting issues >> >> because this is a change to the bylaws, the PR requires voting and a lazy >> 2/3 majority (binding votes: PMC members) to pass >> >> for convenience, I have attached the commits as patches to this email. I >> hope they get through the list filters >> >> please cast your vote now >> >> in three or more days, I will tally the votes and announce the result >> >> thank you! >> >> P.S. I made the copyedit change because, as it turns out, my writing has >> improved a lot since 2015. I have, to the best of my ability, preserved the >> meaning and intent of the text >>
