On 03/26/2015 10:34 PM, Pierre Smits wrote: > Hi all, > > I want to change the first paragraph of the Apache Studio Directory website > from: > > Apache Directory Studio is a complete directory tooling platform intended > to be used with any LDAP server however it is particularly designed for use > with ApacheDS. It is an Eclipse RCP application, composed of several > Eclipse (OSGi) plugins, that can be easily upgraded with additional ones. > These plugins can even run within Eclipse itself. > > to: > > Apache Directory Studio is a complete directory management client intended > to be used with any LDAP server, however it is particularly designed for > use with Apache Directory Server. It is an Eclipse RCP application, > composed of several Eclipse (OSGi) plugins, that can be easily upgraded > with additional ones. These plugins can even run within Eclipse itself.
Looks ok. > Also I want to change the tagline from: > > The Eclipse-based LDAP browser and directory client > > to: > > Eclipse based Directory Client and LDAP Browser I think capitalization is ok. Why do you want to swap directory client and ldap browser? Somehow this is even redundant, maybe "Eclipse based LDAP Client" would be enough. But I see that "directory" is part of our brand. Kind Regards, Stefan
