Scott, It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers, desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). "
I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create to "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online applications...", "...online and offline applications..." or remove the word "web" all together. On Tue, Jan 8, 2013 at 11:34 AM, Guthmann, Scott <sguthm...@on3solutions.com > wrote: > On Jan 8, 2013 8:46 AM, "Greg Reddin" <gred...@gmail.com> wrote: > > One big win from this is that we're going through the process of a > > press release now. Now that we are more aware of the process next time > > so we can manage the timing and whatnot. There's nothing wrong with > > the timing of this, but maybe next time we can coordinate the software > > release with a press release coming shortly thereafter. > > Greg > > I will discuss timing with Sally and see what feedback she has. In my > mind, this PR provides information about a release than was made on > 12-27-12 and it provides news that we are a TLP. The site mirrors and > resources have been upgrading and we are finding errors on some of the > drives & revised error messages.....so, this week or next week is just > about the earliest we could send this info out. > > > > The vote for the Installer ends tomorrow. If the vote tally does not > change drastically overnight, we are in track to make the release happen by > EOD Wednesday. A press release around this time would be perfect timing. > If the website would be ready by > > Friday, we should definitely wait before sending the press release out. > > I will discuss timing with Sally and see what feedback she has and post > here with the advice. > > > > Also, should we mention a redesigned project website in the press > release? > > I do not think we should. Mentioning that we are publishing a redesigned > website is something that we are proud of, but, isn't something a business > application owner would find important. This is something that a business > application owner expects to see. >
