Hi, Paulex, your comments are very good. I will update the page according to your comments.
Thanks, xiaofeng On 11/30/06, Paulex Yang <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Xiao-Feng Li wrote: > Hi, for people who like reading Chinese, below is the Harmony > installation guide in Chinese. > http://wiki.apache.org/harmony/Harmony%20%E5%AE%89%E8%A3%85%E4%B8%AD%E6%96%87%E5%B8%AE%E5%8A%A9 > Cool! Cannot welcome more from me:-) Just had a quick look, really well done! and some of my thoughts: 1. it seems document only for windows, maybe we should mention this in the title? 2. section 3, "cd trunk ant populate_source"-> "cd trunk <newline> ant populate_source" I suppose? 3. section 5, seems doxygen isn't mentioned later....IMHO, it can be moved to the end of this document, as an optional step, if user want to generate the documents themselves, they can install doxygen, go to some directory(like classlib/doc), and input "ant doxygen" or so to get it. 4. section 6.c, if "ant fetch-depends" failed, maybe we can provide some suggestions on how to find the cause(like 7.e)? for example, they may need to set proxy by ANT_OPT, etc, at least we can say: you can send your error message to Harmony mailing list for help... > > Thanks to the content contributors: Yu Zhang, Tingpeng Wu, and Ming Fu. Thanks, too:) > > Let's expect more Harmony pages in other languages. :-) +1 > > Thanks, > xiaofeng > -- Paulex Yang China Software Development Lab IBM
