On 24 November 2010 13:41, Mark Hindess <mark.hind...@googlemail.com> wrote: > > In message <aanlktikn8vzadwba8v-bv0q++aywk079o-h3hm8qz...@mail.gmail.com>, > Sian January writes: >> >> Thanks to those who commented. I have checked this in today for >> in order to get something up there that complies with the ASF >> requirements, but I am happy to update it at a later date if anyone >> wants to discuss the wording further. > > Excellent. Thanks. > >> Is there anyone maintaining the Russian site who is able to translate >> this and check it in? If not, can I suggest we consider removing the >> Russian pages since they are starting to get out of date. > > +1. We should remove them. If someone steps in to update them then > the old pages will be in svn. Currently the Russian pages are just > misleading. >
I will delete the Russian pages in that case as no-one has come forward to update them. As you say it would be easy to reinstate them in the future if anyone wanted to. > -Mark > >> 2010/11/24 sebb <seb...@gmail.com>: >> > 2010/11/24 Sian January <sianjanu...@googlemail.com>: >> >> Yours sounds better but using "complete" could be a bit misleading >> >> since Harmony is not yet complete. =9AI know that's not the intended >> >> meaning but not everyone has English as their first language, so how >> >> about: >> >> >> >> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime with class >> >> libraries and associated tools"? >> > >> > That would be fine. >> > >> >> >> >> >> >> 2010/11/24 sebb <seb...@gmail.com>: >> >>> 2010/11/24 Sian January <sianjanu...@googlemail.com>: >> >>>> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime, class libraries >> >>>> and associated tools"? >> >>> >> >>> Reads oddly to me - "is" should not be used with plurals (libraries, to= >> ols). >> >>> >> >>> Perhaps >> >>> >> >>> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime, complete with >> >>> class libraries >> >>> and associated tools"? >> >>> >> >>>> >> >>>> On 17 November 2010 13:33, Gregory Shimansky <gshiman...@gmail.com> wr= >> ote: >> >>>>> But it also includes JVMTI agent and some tools. So it is not only VM= >> and >> >>>>> class library. >> >>>>> >> >>>>> 17.11.2010 16:18, Alexei Fedotov =D0=C9=DB=C5=D4: >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> Sian, >> >>>>>> I like the latter. Is it ok to replace "consists of" by "is"? >> >>>>>> Independence is assumed by Apache anyway. >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> -- >> >>>>>> With best regards / =D3 =CE=C1=C9=CC=D5=DE=DB=C9=CD=C9 =D0=CF=D6=C5= >> =CC=C1=CE=C9=D1=CD=C9, >> >>>>>> Alexei Fedotov / =E1=CC=C5=CB=D3=C5=CA =E6=C5=C4=CF=D4=CF=D7, >> >>>>>> http://dataved.ru/ >> >>>>>> +7 916 562 8095 >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM, Sian January >> >>>>>> <sianjanu...@googlemail.com> =9Awrote: >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> In order to meet the ASF requirements[1] for the Harmony website we >> >>>>>>> need to have a one-sentence description of the project on our main = >> web >> >>>>>>> page, the downloads page and in the DOAP file. =9AIt needs to descr= >> ibe >> >>>>>>> the 'product' itself rather than the community or the project aims. >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> I haven't spent ages thinking about this but how about something li= >> ke: >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> "Apache Harmony software is an independent implementation of Java S= >> E 5 >> >>>>>>> and 6 with a modular runtime architecture." >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> or to be more general: >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> "Apache Harmony software consists of a modular Java runtime and cla= >> ss >> >>>>>>> libraries." >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> Any thoughts? >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> Sian >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> [1] http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs#naming >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> -- >> >>>>>>> Unless stated otherwise above: >> >>>>>>> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with n= >> umber >> >>>>>>> 741598. >> >>>>>>> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire = >> PO6 >> >>>>>>> 3AU >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>> >> >>>>> >> >>>> >> >>>> >> >>>> >> >>>> -- >> >>>> Unless stated otherwise above: >> >>>> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with numb= >> er 741598. >> >>>> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6= >> 3AU >> >>>> >> >>> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> -- >> >> Unless stated otherwise above: >> >> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number= >> 741598. >> >> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3= >> AU >> >> >> > >> >> >> >> --=20 >> Unless stated otherwise above: >> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number 74= >> 1598. >> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU >> > > > -- Unless stated otherwise above: IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number 741598. Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU
