Sergey,

Thank you for a review!

> It seems to me that document tries to focus on details of the format itself 
> but other aspects of this functionality leak into the explanation and 
> confuses reader.

You are absolutely right, it was an original idea. I will try to
define a terminology and clarify things about schemas.

ср, 16 окт. 2019 г. в 16:49, Sergey Chugunov <sergey.chugu...@gmail.com>:
>
> Then I would suggest to define good terminology at the very beginning of
> the article.
>
> Right in introduction section I see a lot of terms like "Binary object
> format", "Binary object container format" (is it the same thing?), "Binary
> serialization format". In the next section "binary type" pops up. What are
> the relations between them?
>
> Schemes part needs more examples. What is scheme? How it is related to
> binary type? Is it a one-to-one relationship? One-to-many? When a new
> scheme is created? Why type and scheme should be registered on a receiver
> side? And if the receiver exists then who is the sender?
>
> It seems to me that document tries to focus on details of the format itself
> but other aspects of this functionality leak into the explanation and
> confuses reader.
>
> On Wed, Oct 16, 2019 at 2:52 PM Ivan Pavlukhin <vololo...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Pavel, Sergey,
> >
> > Thank you for your feedback!
> >
> > To be exact the document does not describe broad picture (including
> > metadata exchange) and is not a formal format specification
> > intentionally. I wanted to create a lightweight article giving an
> > intuition about binary object structure to a reader. And yes,
> > intuition about metadata registration is definitely an important,
> > related but slightly different subject.
> >
> > ср, 16 окт. 2019 г. в 14:23, Sergey Chugunov <sergey.chugu...@gmail.com>:
> > >
> > > Ivan, thank you for documenting this functionality, agree with Pavel
> > here.
> > >
> > > I think this document is a good starting point and contains a lot of
> > > low-level details and great examples but from my perspective it doesn't
> > > show how binary objects fit into a broader picture.
> > >
> > > It worth adding higher-level details and restructure the document into a
> > > top-down article starting from where binary format is used
> > (representation
> > > of objects in cache, binary protocol for communications with thin
> > clients)
> > > and down to lower details like binary metadata exchange and serialization
> > > and container formats.
> > >
> > > Another option would be to leave the document focused on a low-level
> > > details as it is now but build around it drafts for documents describing
> > > other aspects of Binary Objects.
> > > This will make our documentation much more solid and useful for readers.
> > >
> > > On Wed, Oct 16, 2019 at 2:07 PM Pavel Tupitsyn <ptupit...@apache.org>
> > wrote:
> > >
> > > > Ivan, great job, thanks for putting this together.
> > > >
> > > > I think we also need a more formal description of the format, including
> > > > binary metadata exchange mechanics.
> > > > It was done (partially) for IEP-9 Thin Client Protocol, we should
> > probably
> > > > copy from there:
> > > >
> > > >
> > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/IEP-9+Thin+Client+Protocol#IEP-9ThinClientProtocol-BinaryObjects
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On Wed, Oct 16, 2019 at 11:49 AM Ivan Pavlukhin <vololo...@gmail.com>
> > > > wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Igniters,
> > > > >
> > > > > I published a document about Binary format in cwiki [1]. Please share
> > > > > your feedback. I feel that there is a lack of pictures on the page.
> > > > > Need to figure out what aspects will be more clear with pictures.
> > > > >
> > > > > [1]
> > > > >
> > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/Binary+object+format
> > > > >
> > > > > --
> > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > Ivan Pavlukhin
> > > > >
> > > >
> >
> >
> >
> > --
> > Best regards,
> > Ivan Pavlukhin
> >



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Best regards,
Ivan Pavlukhin

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