Looks good to me. BTW KAFKA-6195 contains more technical details than the KIP. See if you can enrich the Motivation section with some of the details.
Thanks On Fri, Mar 23, 2018 at 12:05 PM, Skrzypek, Jonathan < jonathan.skrzy...@gs.com> wrote: > Hi, > > I would like to start a vote for KIP-235 > > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/KAFKA/KIP- > 235%3A+Add+DNS+alias+support+for+secured+connection > > This is a proposition to add an option for reverse dns lookup of > bootstrap.servers hosts, allowing the use of dns aliases on clusters using > SASL authentication. > > > >