Announcement for new release Apache OFBiz 09.04.01 DRAFT

[Jacopo Cappellato]

Please help me to improve the draft of the announcement email for the new 
release:

https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/OFBADMIN/Announcement+for+new+release+Apache+OFBiz+09.04.01+DRAFT

Regards,

Jacopo