Looks good, Sandro. Some suggestions: - Start with a demo, it will pique the audience's interest so they can get through the significant "why" list. - More padding between the lines of text will look better - use more slides, or maybe a smaller font. - Maybe intersperse demos within the why pages - demo'ing certain parts (skins, web queries, etc.)?
Michael Bushe Principal Bushe Enterprises, Inc. mich...@bushe.com www.bushe.com www.mindfulsoftware.com On Tue, Jun 1, 2010 at 7:40 PM, Greg Brown <gkbr...@mac.com> wrote: > Doesn't look like the PDF made it through - could you re-post it in a zip > file? > > On May 31, 2010, at 7:00 PM, Sandro Martini wrote: > > > Hi to all, > > if could be useful to someone, in attach you can find the Slides for > > my presentation of last week to JUG Torino, or better for my > > "Introduction to Pivot", in English. > > > > The original file is in OpenOffice 3.1.x Impress format, and the PDF > > is generated from it. > > > > Tell me what you think. > > > > If you think they are OK, we could put them in SVN /under > > /presentations or other main folder, or other ...), but that folder > > doesn't exist at the moment, so be free to create it and maybe save > > files inside, or tell me. > > > > > > Bye, > > Sandro > > <Apache Pivot - Presentation to JUG Torino - 2010-05-28.odp> > >
