pitjazz commented on a change in pull request #77:
URL: https://github.com/apache/shiro-site/pull/77#discussion_r578349161



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File path: how-to-contribute.md
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@@ -104,74 +99,101 @@ If you want to add a feature, you should bring it up for 
discussion on the dev@s
 
 In short, communication is a vital part of making a contribution to an Apache 
project.
 
+<a name="HowtoContribute-git"></a>
+<a name="HowtoContribute-GitUsage"></a>
+##Git Usage
+
+An overview of how to use Git to participate in Shiro development. Beginners, 
do't be afraid - you cannot accidentally destroy the actual code repository, 
because you are working with a local copy as an anonymous user. Therefore, you 
do not have the system permissions to change anything. You can only update your 
local repository and compare your revisions with the real repository. The 
[Download Shiro](download.html "Download") page explains how to check-out the 
code base and build your local copy.
+
 <a name="HowtoContribute-gettingStartedGit"></a>
-###Getting Started
+###Git, Getting Started
 
-First, lets make sure that you've added your name and email to your 
`~/.gitconfig`:
+Add your name and email to your `~/.gitconfig`:
 
 ``` bash
 $ git config --global user.name "Your Name"
 $ git config --global user.email [email protected]
 ```
 
-You'll grab the Shiro source with git:
+Grab the Shiro source:
 
 ``` bash
 $ git clone https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/shiro.git
 ```
 
-If you already have the source, make sure you're working with the most recent 
version. Do a `git pull` if you cloned the source more than a few hours ago. 
(Apache Shiro development can move pretty fast!)
+Make sure you're working with the most recent version. Do a `git pull` if you 
cloned the source more than a few hours ago.
 
 ``` bash
 $ git checkout -b mybranch
 ```

Review comment:
       Squashed the reverting commit.
   
   Added instruction to fork in "getting started" section.

##########
File path: how-to-contribute.md
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@@ -104,74 +99,101 @@ If you want to add a feature, you should bring it up for 
discussion on the dev@s
 
 In short, communication is a vital part of making a contribution to an Apache 
project.
 
+<a name="HowtoContribute-git"></a>
+<a name="HowtoContribute-GitUsage"></a>
+##Git Usage
+
+An overview of how to use Git to participate in Shiro development. Beginners, 
do't be afraid - you cannot accidentally destroy the actual code repository, 
because you are working with a local copy as an anonymous user. Therefore, you 
do not have the system permissions to change anything. You can only update your 
local repository and compare your revisions with the real repository. The 
[Download Shiro](download.html "Download") page explains how to check-out the 
code base and build your local copy.
+
 <a name="HowtoContribute-gettingStartedGit"></a>
-###Getting Started
+###Git, Getting Started
 
-First, lets make sure that you've added your name and email to your 
`~/.gitconfig`:
+Add your name and email to your `~/.gitconfig`:
 
 ``` bash
 $ git config --global user.name "Your Name"
 $ git config --global user.email [email protected]
 ```
 
-You'll grab the Shiro source with git:
+Grab the Shiro source:
 
 ``` bash
 $ git clone https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/shiro.git
 ```
 
-If you already have the source, make sure you're working with the most recent 
version. Do a `git pull` if you cloned the source more than a few hours ago. 
(Apache Shiro development can move pretty fast!)
+Make sure you're working with the most recent version. Do a `git pull` if you 
cloned the source more than a few hours ago.
 
 ``` bash
 $ git checkout -b mybranch
 ```
 
-This does two things: One, it creates the branch mybranch and two, it changes 
your working branch to mybranch. Running `git branch` will show you which 
branch you're working on, with an asterisk next to the active branch, like so:
+This does two things:
+* creates the branch mybranch
+* changes your working branch to mybranch.
+Running `git branch` will show you which branch you're working on, with an 
asterisk next to the active branch.
 
 ``` bash
 [user@localhost shiro]$ git branch
 master
 * mybranch
 ```
 
-Make whatever changes you're going to make, be sure to use git add to stage 
the changes, and then you're going to commit the changes to your working branch:
+Use `git add` to stage the changes. Commit the changes to your working branch:

Review comment:
       Do you mean the capitalization this phrase: "Use `git add` to stage the 
changes. Commit the changes to your working branch:"? I think it should be 
correct as it is...




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