bossenti commented on code in PR #2940:
URL: https://github.com/apache/streampipes/pull/2940#discussion_r1643290041
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streampipes-client-python/docs/tutorials/1-introduction-to-streampipes-python-client.ipynb:
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@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
"\n",
"### Why there is an extra Python library for StreamPipes?\n",
"[Apache StreamPipes](https://streampipes.apache.org/) aims to enable
non-technical users to connect and analyze IoT data streams.\n",
- "To this end, it provides an easy-to-use and convenient user interface
that allows one to connect to an IoT data source and create some visual\n",
+ "To achieve this, it provides an easy-to-use and convenient user interface
that allows one to connect to an IoT data source and create some visual\n",
"graphs within a few minutes. <br>\n",
- "Although this is the main use case of Apache StreamPipes, it can also
provide great value for people who are eager to work on data analysis or data
science with IoT data, but don't we do get in touch with all the hassle
associated with extracting data from devices in a suitable format.\n",
+ "While this is the primary use case for Apache StreamPipes, it also offers
significant value to those interested in data analysis or data science with IoT
data, without the need to handle the complexities of extracting data from
devices in a suitable format..\n",
Review Comment:
```suggestion
"While this is the primary use case for Apache StreamPipes, it also
offers significant value to those interested in data analysis or data science
with IoT data, without the need to handle the complexities of extracting data
from devices in a suitable format.\n",
```
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