Thank you Jackie, Now these corrections are made and the documentation has been modified as discussed in versions 4.8.1, 4.8.0 and 4.7.0. I will also verify with Asela whether he has any further comments regarding the changes made so far.
Best Regards, On Wed, Mar 12, 2014 at 11:37 PM, Jackie Wheeler <jac...@wso2.com> wrote: > Hi Rukshani, > > A few notes: > > - The screen shot does not display unless you are logged in because it > is pointing off to some other space. Please attach it to this page and > point to it from there. > - When listing the library articles, please list the titles of the > articles and make them links. Don't just list the URLs, which are > meaningless (the user should not have to click the URL to find out what it > contains). > - I think the info on bindings is still not very clear. I found this > page [1], which provides a clear explanation, so let's just change the > first paragraph to "You can apply policies at the following levels in the > binding hierarchy" and make "binding" a link to [1]. > > [1] http://www.w3schools.com/webservices/ws_wsdl_binding.asp > > Thanks, > Jackie > > > On Mon, Mar 10, 2014 at 11:37 PM, Rukshani Weerasinha > <ruksh...@wso2.com>wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> Now I have finished applying the changes mentioned by Jackie. However, I >> have further questions relating to comments *5 * and *7 *before this >> documentation can be considered finalised. >> >> With regard to comment number *7*, I included the following text under >> the title *Defining Policies at Binding Level*. >> >> "The WSO2 ESB has the ability to apply policies at the binding >> hierarchy. This hierarchy includes bindings for the WS-Policy for SOAP 1.1 >> and SOAP 1.2 endpoints which are referred to as SOAP bindings. A SOAP >> binding specifies the style and the SOAP protocol to be used for operations >> and messages handled by the WS-Policy." >> >> Asela, can you please verify whether this text accurately describes the >> technical concept? >> >> Jackie, do you think this explanation is sufficient or do you think that >> more information should be included? >> >> With regard to comment *5*, I referred the following articles: >> >> >> 1. https://wso2.org/library/3786 >> 2. https://wso2.org/library/23 >> 3. https://wso2.org/library/3132 >> 4. http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/ms996497.aspx >> >> 1. has the same information that we agreed to remove from the page >> itself. Therefore, this link too will be removed. >> >> The other articles have information about WS-Policy in general (not about >> applying security policies for WSO2 ESB). It did not seem correct to >> incorporate that information in this page. Therefore, I moved those links >> to the top of the page (to the introductory paragraph which mentions >> WS-Policy). >> >> Jackie and Asela, can you please let me know what you think about this? >> >> Best Regards, >> >> >> On Mon, Mar 10, 2014 at 9:22 AM, Jackie Wheeler <jac...@wso2.com> wrote: >> >>> Hi Rukshani, >>> >>> Here are some comments for you. >>> >>> 1. Whereas the title should use title-case capitalization, the headings >>> should use sentence-case capitalization. So "Binding Level" should be >>> "Binding level", "Binding Operation Level" should be "Binding operation >>> level", etc. >>> >>> 2. When there are multiple sections on a page, insert a table of >>> contents at the top of the page and set the max heading level to 3. >>> >>> 3. The following text appears twice on the page, once at the beginning >>> of the section and then again just before the info on services.xml: >>> >>> *Defining Policies at Bindings* >>> >>> The WSO2 Carbon has the ability to apply policies at the binding >>> hierarchy. You can apply policies at three different policy subjects in the >>> binding hierarchy. They are: >>> >>> - *Binding level* >>> - *Binding operation level* >>> - *Binding message level* >>> >>> 4. Isn't the information on services.xml and the policy editor the part >>> that was supposed to be removed? >>> >>> 5. Rather than point people to library articles, please review those >>> articles and work the appropriate content into the documentation, where we >>> can maintain it and keep it updated. >>> >>> 6. "The WSO2 Carbon" should be "WSO2 ESB". >>> >>> 7. We talk about the bindings hierarchy without giving any explanation >>> as to what bindings are. Since this is a fairly technical concept, we >>> should give a very brief introduction to it so people have context for the >>> type of bindings we're talking about here. >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Jackie >>> >>> >>> On Sun, Mar 9, 2014 at 8:10 PM, Rukshani Weerasinha >>> <ruksh...@wso2.com>wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Asela, >>>> >>>> Can you please check the new sections I have added to the following >>>> page? >>>> >>>> https://docs.wso2.org/display/ESB481/Applying+Security+Policies >>>> >>>> The subheadings of the new sections added are *Defining Policies at >>>> Service Level *and *Policy Selection*. In addition, the following text >>>> within inverted commas was added under *Defining Policies at Bindings. >>>> *Can you please check these sections and send me your feedback. >>>> >>>> "Binding Level >>>> >>>> A security policy defined at the binding level is applicable to both in >>>> and out messages generated by all the operations connected to the selected >>>> binding. >>>> Binding Operation Level >>>> >>>> A security policy defined at the binding operation level is applicable >>>> to both in and out messages generated by a specific operation connected >>>> to the selected binding. >>>> Binding Operation Message Level >>>> >>>> A security policy defined at the binding operation message level >>>> is applicable to either in or out messages generated by a specific >>>> operation connected to the selected binding. >>>> >>>> *In Message* should be selected if you want the security policy to be >>>> applicable only for the incoming messages of the ESB relating to the >>>> selected binding. >>>> >>>> *Out Message* should be selected if you want the security policy to be >>>> applicable only for the outgoing messages of the ESB relating to the >>>> selected binding." >>>> >>>> I have also removed the section *WS-Policy Editor. *However, this >>>> document still does not answer some of the questions asked in the Jira >>>> task. Can we please discuss? >>>> >>>> Best Regards, >>>> >>>> >>>> On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 4:23 PM, Asela Pathberiya <as...@wso2.com>wrote: >>>> >>>>> On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 4:15 PM, Rukshani Weerasinha <ruksh...@wso2.com> >>>>> wrote: >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > Hi, >>>>> > >>>>> > The Jira task https://wso2.org/jira/browse/DOCUMENTATION-613requires the >>>>> > following page to have more information about how to use the UI for >>>>> the >>>>> > Policy Selection UI. >>>>> > >>>>> > https://docs.wso2.org/display/ESB481/Applying+Security+Policies >>>>> > >>>>> > When I spoke to the Security Team, I was told that this UI is no >>>>> longer used >>>>> > and the functionality no longer works as it is supposed to. It was >>>>> also said >>>>> > that there is no services.xml file as mentioned in the documentation >>>>> file. >>>>> > >>>>> > Does anyone have any further input on this? If this page refers to >>>>> obsolete >>>>> > functionality, shall I remove it? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Yes.. what is in the current document, is not correct now, Because we >>>>> are not exposing the service.xml file to configure policy attachments >>>>> ... Therefore, users can use the "Policy Selection" management >>>>> console UI to define policies for service, binding and operational, >>>>> message levels... But actually, there are some issues with the UI... >>>>> some functions are not working as they are provided in the UI. I guess >>>>> there are public jira for them.. But still we can define separate >>>>> policies for service and binding level.. Therefore we can update the >>>>> current document with "Policy Selection" UI by providing >>>>> configuration details with screen shots. >>>>> >>>>> However design view of "The WS-Policy Editor" that is no longer used >>>>> and It is safe to remove it from the document. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Asela. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> > >>>>> > Best Regards, >>>>> > >>>>> > -- >>>>> > Rukshani Weerasinha >>>>> > >>>>> > WSO2 Inc. >>>>> > Web:http://wso2.com >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > -- >>>>> > Rukshani Weerasinha >>>>> > >>>>> > WSO2 Inc. >>>>> > Web:http://wso2.com >>>>> > >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> Thanks & Regards, >>>>> Asela >>>>> >>>>> ATL >>>>> Mobile : +94 777 625 933 >>>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Rukshani Weerasinha >>>> >>>> WSO2 Inc. >>>> Web:http://wso2.com >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> *Jackie Wheeler* >>> VP, Technical Content >>> WSO2, Inc. >>> Mobile: +1 510 725-2876 >>> http://wso2.com/ >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> Rukshani Weerasinha >> >> WSO2 Inc. >> Web:http://wso2.com >> >> > > > -- > *Jackie Wheeler* > VP, Technical Content > WSO2, Inc. > Mobile: +1 510 725-2876 > http://wso2.com/ > -- Rukshani Weerasinha WSO2 Inc. 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