On May 15, 2010, at 7:19 AM, Michael Crilly wrote: > Greetings. > > I would like to present a very (VERY) small section from an Adium "book" > (more of a polished, refined guide) I'm working on with Rob-to86. We only > started the idea for the book a few hours before this e-mail has been sent, > so this is quite literally the first draft of the first chapter. > > I'm looking for opinions on the writing style employed in the text. Mainly > the tone and the use of "jokes". > > http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2664389/PDFs/Adium/Documentation%20Project/About%20Adium.pdf >
I love the tone. Professionally playful is a good balance. Our mascot is a friendly duck; acting all 'corporate' would be missing the point. Thanks for working on this. :) Cheers, Evan
