Looks great.

While I am not native English speaker, would it not be better
to exachange the position of *naturally* and *compiles* on the following
sentence?

From:

"D naturally compiles to efficient native code."

To:

"D compiles naturally to efficient native code."

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Paulo

Am 20.11.2011 09:40, schrieb Andrei Alexandrescu:
Thanks to all who provided feedback! I read again the entire thread,
then made one more pass:

http://d-programming-language.org/new/

I didn't make technical/aesthetic changes (JS/noJS, placement of news,
links to secondary pages etc) so when providing additional feedback
please focus on the core message.

There are significant changes of content: some keywords are different,
text is shorter, no more "community" section (probably it'll go on a
different page).

There's a prominent example at the top. I'm thinking to rotate that
randomly, and pick examples out of an always-running contest.


Thanks,

Andrei

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