Thanks Chris! I added some info back in - I thought telling a story about why we did the testing and what we'll be going forward with was important. I know with these additions, I made it a little word-ier, but hopefully the blog and community folks will like it too. :)
Here's my edits <https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1&diff=15334156&oldid=15334048> . Cheers, Deb -- Deb Tankersley Product Manager, Discovery Wikimedia Foundation On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM, Chris Koerner <[email protected]> wrote: > After some feedback from the blog folks I have an updated draft to share. > Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger > story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well > (not the other way around!). > > I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big > news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs. > > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1 > > Here's a diff > <https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACKoerner_%28WMF%29%2FWork%2FA-B_Test_Results_1&type=revision&diff=15333867&oldid=15327844> > of my slew of changes. > > -- > Yours, > Chris Koerner > Community Liaison - Discovery > Wikimedia Foundation > > _______________________________________________ > discovery mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/discovery > >
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