Dave - Working on v3 of this document. There are some changes from the previous version which greatly improve clarity! Thanks! Here are some more suggestions, comments, questions, and thoughts. - MLD

p60, 4.2: "The Media Access Control (MAC) layer needs low-latency transmission control -- faster than the FIFO processing currently implemented in GNU Radio flow graphs." : How about just removing the reference to GNU Radio's flow graphs (or maybe, moving it to the GR baseline section), since it's the only "comparison" in that whole paragraph. You can certainly add something else on the tail of that short sentence, but it needs to be an extension which describes the "low-latency transmission control". If this concept is solely for prioritizing messages, then you could make it something like "The Media Access Control (MAC) layer needs low-latency transmission control, allowing for high-priority messages to propagate through a set of m-blocks undisturbed so-as to minimize computational latency." if you felt that was appropriate. If, for the purposes of your description, this concept is more than that, then add something else. Either way, removing the comparison IMHO is useful.

p61, REQ 4.10: I would add the words "the current" to "GR Framework" to make it explicit what you're not going to change.

p61, REQ 4.13, 4.14: Could these be combined, or 4.14 just removed? What is the difference, since the latter seems to be a subset of the former. What are the concepts supposed to be, as they seem duplicative to me?

p63, 4.5.1; and p70, 4.8.1: It would probably be worth noting that in the gr-stuff world there is no generic built-in functionality for stopping computations to allow for higher-priority computations to take place (even if the gr-scheduler were written to handle prioritization) [NOTE: it would be possible for individual gr-blocks to do this, but none at this time do that I know of]. Thus -any- use of the gr-scheduler must wait until completion of all data being processed. This goes for m-blocks too when encapsulating a gr-flow- graph, not just gr_blocks and flow-graphs standing alone.

p64: "systolic": I still feel it just doesn't work. Yes, I read what you wrote about the "pulsing" nature of the GR scheduler, of which I agree that's pretty much how it works. But "systolic", at least in my understanding and def'n reading, means contraction/compression (specifically of the heart muscles, but could be others) ... the result of which is the pulsing nature of blood-flow. The pulsing is a result of the systole, but isn't what the systole does or is. I still feel that "systematic" or "round robin" or even (arranged, methodic, orderly, well-ordered, well-regulated) might be better when used appropriately.

Also, the whole discussion of packet radio requirements doesn't really fit into the GR baseline, and should instead probably be in 4.3, or at least elsewhere.

p66, 4.6.3: I'd move the second paragraph to the second or third sentence of the first paragraph ... just fits there better.

* Also, I don't understand "m-block s may be enclosed within a single m-block and treated as a single entity." down to the flow-graph stuff From our previous discussion, the aggregation is purely symbolic in nature ... there is still a virtual, possibly dynamic, graph upon which the m-scheduler must work. Thus, how can aggregation make a "single entity" w/r.t. the m-scheduler? Aggregation implies to me that the primary m-block's "handle_message" is called, and then that m-block deals with all the aggregated internal m-blocks (and gr_blocks, if any).

* Regarding: "Primitives will be provided to allow the connection of internal components of the m-block to each other and to external interfaces." ... So the m-block class will provide the "graph" functionality, instead of having it be an external entity as is currently done in GR? 'tis a good idea, IMHO.

p67, 4.6.4: " transformed by the blocks in the flow graph." --> "any internal flow graph". I assume you're referring to the gr_block flow- graph here ...

p67: 4.6.7: which "flow graph" is this referring to? Looks like the m-block stuff, which isn't a flow graph at all, so I think this needs to be changed. You might want to do a global search for this term to make sure all references are appropriate, and change those which are not.

p68, 4.8.1; and p74, 4.8.4: How can an m-block have zero ports? I thought that all data / metadata / signals / whatever were transported via these ports. Without a port of any type, what can an m-block do?

p68&70, 4.8.1: How can you implement "a mechanism is required that will allow m-block s to relinquish control of a processor after a certain number of processor cycles have been used" for a gr-flow- graph and guarantee that the internal flow-graph's memory is maintained? How is this implemented in general? I guess you could start a new thread, which would execute for X us or ms, but that seems like a costly overhead when "real-time" needs very low latency. You might want to tweak the last paragraph, first sentence, to state that the gr_single... will run all the data through regardless of the number of processor cycles it takes, in order to guarantee memory coherency (or something like that).

p70, 4.8.2.2: "Within an m-block, data is moved through the GNU Radio flow graph using a GNU Radio scheduler that runs within its own thread of execution." ... this doesn't sound correct, regarding the previous discussion.

Also, looks like a new number (or more) is missing, starting with "However, information ...". Or, well, something is just wrong with the rest of this section ... seems non-coherent. Could you please number / reorganize / rewrite / make more coherent?

p75, 4.9.5: Could you make a drawing depicting replicated ports? Might add insight for some folks.

p76, 4.9.11: "Messages arriving at an unconnected relay port are discarded." ... while it's nice to have unconnected ports, this takes extra processing to deal with. Is it possible to never have unconnected ports, and/or to always make use of all ports? Or in the dynamic graphing, is this just a possibility which can happen and thus needs to be considered?

p77, 4.9.11: "These ports are not visible from the outside of the m- block, and are not a part of the peer interface." ... what does "visible" mean here? I thought that all m-blocks are dealt with by the m-scheduler? I think what you're trying to say is that any internal ports will be defined solely inside the definition of the enclosing m-block, when using this semi-formal description, and hence will not be available for connections outside of the enclosing m- block. Yes?

p77, (4.14-4.16):  Would it make more sense to first state that
     peer interface  = external end ports  U  relay ports
then go on with the current 4.14 and 4.15 (if desired, or not).



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