Hi Charles, thanks for the effort - besides the stuff already mentioned ... some less "legal", but rather "understandability" related comments:
* Understandability: Most of the tdf mail addresses refer to mailing lists, but "le...@documentfoundation.org" is "just" a normal mail address. This difference might be important for some people - would it be helpful to say "... send an email to the non-public address le...@documentfoundation.org"? * Usability: Most of the text doesn't use wiki capabilities like headings or second outline level enumeration (e.g. no TOC is added by the wiki that might make finding the desired information more quickly). * Usability: Once the text is finalized, we may ask to add the logo examples - the logo graphics are already in the wiki, so why not use them? Concerning the usability items; I can work on this once the text is approved ... or (just ping me), I can try to improve things tomorrow evening - if it is needed before any final approval. Am Dienstag, den 01.03.2011, 18:19 +0100 schrieb Charles-H. Schulz: > *** SC Members and their deputies*** > > Please vote +1 or -1 in order to approve the trademark policy (text is > here: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/TradeMark_Policy) +1 (having in mind the comments above and below, and by the others) > Please also make sure you have read the additional material here: > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Logo_Policy and there: > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/Branding#Resources_for_external_use Another small comment - I've asked on the design list whether "external use" is a proper name for that. There is an ongoing discussion how to name that, and whether to separate the different logos for TDF / community use. So please be aware that we might (ask to) change this naming in the near future ... Charles, thanks for your work! Cheers, Christoph -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to steering-discuss+h...@documentfoundation.org List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/steering-discuss/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***