Hi, On Mon, May 23, 2016 at 04:58:07PM +0200, Mike Saunders wrote: > Here's an idea for a simplified version of the DLP front page, as discussed > with David. It takes the core info but makes it snappier and straight to the > point, directing readers at other pages if they want to explore further. All > feedback welcome -- if nobody has any objections I could put it online next > week.
I like it, but I would make a few small corrections... > Many computer users today have digital content created years ago and stored > in old, outdated and proprietary file formats. Frequently, these old files I would use "document formats" instead of "file formats", as that is what we are primarily interested in (as opposed to audio, video, data dumps from the Apollo program etc.) > Many well-known free and open source software applications use Document I guess 5-6 can be called "many", but I would prefer to use "various" or similar vague term. Note that there is also at least one closed source application (a CorelDRAW viewer for OS X). > Join us: read more [about the Document Liberation Project], check out the > [list of projects] we're working on, and [contribute] code to existing I think "or" should be used here instead of "and". > libraries (or create a new one). I would prefer to change the last clause to something like "... or learn how you can contribute to the effort." There are more ways to contribute than by writing code. I also think there should be a clause about social networks. D. -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentliberation.org/www/discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
