Author: adrian
Date: 2011-12-09 15:14:04 -0800 (Fri, 09 Dec 2011)
New Revision: 17188

Modified:
   django/trunk/docs/topics/db/optimization.txt
Log:
Fixed some comma splices in the 'Insert in bulk' section of db/optimization.txt

Modified: django/trunk/docs/topics/db/optimization.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/topics/db/optimization.txt        2011-12-09 22:13:27 UTC 
(rev 17187)
+++ django/trunk/docs/topics/db/optimization.txt        2011-12-09 23:14:04 UTC 
(rev 17188)
@@ -283,21 +283,23 @@
         Entry(headline="Python 3.1 Planned")
     ])
 
-Is preferable to::
+...is preferable to::
 
     Entry.objects.create(headline="Python 3.0 Released")
     Entry.objects.create(headline="Python 3.1 Planned")
 
 Note that there are a number of :meth:`caveats to this method
-<django.db.models.query.QuerySet.bulk_create>`, make sure it is appropriate for
-your use case. This also applies to :class:`ManyToManyFields
-<django.db.models.ManyToManyField>`, doing::
+<django.db.models.query.QuerySet.bulk_create>`, so make sure it's appropriate
+for your use case.
 
+This also applies to :class:`ManyToManyFields
+<django.db.models.ManyToManyField>`, so doing::
+
     my_band.members.add(me, my_friend)
 
-Is preferable to::
+...is preferable to::
 
     my_band.members.add(me)
     my_band.members.add(my_friend)
 
-Where ``Bands`` and ``Artists`` have a many-to-many relationship.
+...where ``Bands`` and ``Artists`` have a many-to-many relationship.

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