On Sun, Jun 24, 2018 at 9:27 PM, Kurt Andersen <ku...@drkurt.com> wrote:
> I've now posted draft 15 of the ARC protocol. It should be ready for last > call - please review with that in mind. Note that the XML was a little > wacky in the Implementation Status section. I'll fix that formatting in the > next rev. > I haven't read the entire thing yet (I will before Montreal) but I've noticed that the organization of Section 5 has gone a little sideways: * In Section 5.1, bullet 3 seems weird because it doesn't describe a step * Section 5.1 is titled Sealer Actions, but Sections 5.1.4 and onward don't actually enumerate actions for the sealer; they contain advice and general discussion A couple of other quick points until I can do a full pass: * Section 9.2, bullet 1: For this attack to work, you don't have to forge signatures; the signature could be the letter "x", and you'll still hit the DNS to get the public key to try to verify it * The IANA registration templates in Section10.1 are improperly formatted * All of the formal references to old versions of the draft seem unnecessary; simply using prose for those should suffice rather than bulking up the Reference sections -MSK
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