Apologies if this has already been caught by others.
Just spotted some small typos in section 8. Was reading this specific section in connection with something GDPR (the fun!) related. 8. Privacy Considerations The Authenticated Received Chain provides a verifiable record of the handlers for a message. This record may include Personally Identifiable Information such as IP address and domain names. Such information is also including in existing header fields such as the "Received" header field. a) Suggest "IP addresses" to match plural for "domain names" or make it "an IP address". b) Replace "including" with "included" because it's grammatically incorrect. c) Suggest "exiting non-ARC related header fields" to distinguish that these are absolutely nothing to do with the protocol. It may be obvious to us but not to those who may discount implementation because they think it adds new risk. Ken. _______________________________________________ dmarc mailing list dmarc@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmarc
