This is getting much better - thanks for all the wordsmithing. I have one
nuance to add...

On Thu, Feb 25, 2021 at 6:13 AM Dave Crocker <dcroc...@gmail.com> wrote:

>
> The suggested revisions to Barry's suggested revisions, below, primarily
> serve to reference the PSD construct without needing to reference the
> PSL.  And, of course, there are various other suggested wording tweaks...
>
> EVEN NEWER
>     Domain-based Message Authentication, Reporting, and
>     Conformance (DMARC) permits a mail-originating
>     organization to express domain-level policies and preferences for
>     message validation, disposition, and reporting, which a mail-receiving
>     organization can use to improve mail handling.
>

Especially in the case of the PSD policies, one should not expect that the
controlling organization would necessarily be "a mail-originating
organization". Generally the idea is to *disavow* being such :-)

Suggested alternate text:

Domain-based Message Authentication, Reporting, and Conformance (DMARC)
permits a domain-controlling
organization to express domain-level policies and preferences for message
validation, disposition, and reporting,
which a mail-receiving organization can use to improve mail handling.

--Kurt
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