Hi Alex,

Thanks for the support.
I will issue a new version shortly.

Regards,
        /Danny

-----Original Message-----
From: Alexandre Petrescu [mailto:alexandre.petre...@gmail.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, July 05, 2016 17:49
To: Moses, Danny
Cc: dmm@ietf.org; jouni.nos...@gmail.com; Seil Jeon
Subject: Re: [DMM] New version of the OnDemand Mobility draft

Hi Danny,

Le 03/07/2016 à 16:03, Moses, Danny a écrit :
> Hi Alex,
>
>
>
> From the standard point of view, IPv6 indeed provides two alternatives:
> Stateless and Stateful address assignment, and the text in the draft 
> does not mention this and might even be misleading to assume that the 
> network always assigns the source IP address - so I agree with your comment.
>
>
>
> The reason for that is that this draft is meant for application 
> developers who need to understand how they can influence the network 
> behavior through address type request. For them, the exact mechanism 
> of address assignment is a detail which might be confusing. Our 
> thinking was, that even in the stateless case the generated source IP 
> address comprises a network prefix that was assigned by some entity in 
> the network. So the text is still true for the Stateless case.
>
>
>
> If you still think that this is too misleading, I propose the 
> following
> change:
>
> 1.       Remove the text - 'assigned to the mobile host by the network'
> in the definition of both the Fixed IP address and Session-lasting IP 
> address.
>
> 2.       Add a comment indicating that the IP address may either be
> assigned to the mobile host by the network (Stateful address 
> assignment) or generated by the host using a Prefix that was assigned 
> by the network
> (stateless)
>
>
>
> As a result, the text in this section will become (new text in red):
>
>
>
>
>
>    Three types of IP addresses are defined with respect to the mobility
>    management.
>
>    - Fixed IP Address
>
>    A Fixed IP address is an address assigned to the mobile host by the
>    network with a guarantee to be valid for a very long time, regardless
>    of whether it is being used in any packets to/from the mobile host,
>    or whether or not the mobile host is connected to the network, or
>    whether it moves from one point-of-attachment to another (with a
>    different subnet or IP prefix) while it is connected.
>
>    Fixed IP address are required by applications that need both IP
>    session continuity and IP address reachability.
>
>    - Session-lasting IP Address
>
>    A session-lasting IP address is an address assigned to the mobile
>    host by the network with a guarantee to be valid through-out the IP
>    session(s) for which it was requested.  It is guaranteed to be valid
>    even after the mobile host had moved from one point-of-attachment to
>    another (with a different subnet or IP prefix).
>
>    Session-lasting IP addresses are required by applications that need
>    IP session continuity but do not need IP address reachability.
>
>    - Non-persistent IP Address
>
>    This type of IP address provides neither IP session continuity nor IP
>    address reachability.  The IP address is obtained from the serving IP
>    gateway and it is not maintained across gateway changes.  In other
>    words, the IP address may be released and replaced by a new IP address
>    when the IP gateway changes due to the movement of the mobile host.
>
>    Applications running as servers at a published IP address require a
>    Fixed IP Address.  Long-standing applications (e.g., an SSH session)
>    may also require this type of address.  Enterprise applications that
>    connect to an enterprise network via virtual LAN require a Fixed IP
>    Address.
>
>    Applications with short-lived transient IP sessions can use Session-
>    lasting IP Addresses.  For example: Web browsers.
>
>    Applications with very short IP sessions, such as DNS client and
>    instant messengers, can utilize Non-persistent IP Addresses.  Even
>    though they could very well use a Fixed of Session-lasting IP
>    Addresses, the transmission latency would be minimized when a Non-
>    persistent IP Address is used.
>
>
>
>    The network creates the desired guarantee (Fixed, Session-lasting 
> or
>
>    Non-persistent) by either assigning an address (as part of a 
> stateful
>
>    address generation), or by assigning the address prefix (as part of 
> a
>
>    stateless address generation).
>
>
>
> Does this change addresses your concerns?

Yes, this change addresses my concerns.

Alex

>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>                 /Danny
>
>
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alexandre Petrescu [mailto:alexandre.petre...@gmail.com]
> Sent: Friday, July 01, 2016 09:41
> To: jouni.nos...@gmail.com; Seil Jeon
> Cc: Moses, Danny; dmm@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [DMM] New version of the OnDemand Mobility draft
>
>
>
> My concern is partially addressed, yes.
>
>
>
> There is still this text which can be improved:
>
>>    - Session-lasting IP Address
>
>>
>
>>    A session-lasting IP address is an address assigned to the mobile
>
>>    host by the network [...]
>
>
>
> A session-lasting IP address is an address formed in conjunction by 
> the host and the network (SLAAC), or assigned by the network (DHCP) 
> [...]
>
>
>
> A session-lasting IP prefix is a prefix advertised to the mobile host 
> by the network [...]
>
>
>
> Alex
>
>
>
>
>
> Le 30/06/2016 à 19:05, Jouni Korhonen a écrit :
>
>> Seil, Alex,
>
>>
>
>> Have your concerns been addressed in the -06 revision?
>
>>
>
>> - Jouni
>
>>
>
>> 6/30/2016, 2:20 AM, Moses, Danny kirjoitti:
>
>>>
>
>>> Hi,
>
>>>
>
>>> I have posted a new version of the OnDemand Mobility draft:
>
>>> _draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-06_
>
>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility/>.
>
>>> This new version includes some text editing according to the 
>>> comments
>
>>> from Seil and change of classification from the Standard track to
>
>>> Informational.
>
>>>
>
>>> Please support it (those who have not cast their support yet).
>
>>>
>
>>> Thanks,
>
>>>         /Danny
>
>>>
>
>>>
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