Hi All, I do appreciate all the detailed reviews and comments after rev 17, and during IETF 122 dmm session. The following updates have been made to address comments:
1. Comment that slice types listed in section 1 should be exemplary (updated in first para, section 1) 2. Clarify relation between 5QI/slices. Updated in section 2 (snippet below): "The TN PE does not consider 5QI in the DSCP or GTP-U header for mapping the 5G slice. 3GPP QoS with 5QI and corresponding DSCP mapping can be applied to traffic flows in PDU sessions in the slice independently." 3. Comment in IETF 122: "S-NSSAI and relation to EP_Transport is not clear" Revised section 3 as follows. Split the original section 3.2 into 2 sections (3.2 and 3.3) as that section was getting too long. Aspects of 3GPP slice configuration are now in section 3.2 and no changes to the text there were needed. Text in section 3.3 is revised to describe configuration related to S-NSSAI, EP_Transport on 3GPP nodes and IP PE, both prior to PDU session establishment, and during PDU session establishment. The changes can be found in paragraphs 2 and 3 of section 3.3. Also, a few changes in section 5.1 to link the changes in 3.3 to the ACaaS extension for UDP tunnel. And thank you - Charles and Lionel - for volunteering to review this new revision. Links to the new revision: Datatracker: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjohn.kaippallimalil%40futurewei.com%7C56beda3f5ea54d6a325108dd81096a0e%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638808599620182861%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=AbpolLESXYPJltOuJtC3rxL7GOEb5T9rSqQH5XKTeHQ%3D&reserved=0<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility/> Diff: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fauthor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-18&data=05%7C02%7Cjohn.kaippallimalil%40futurewei.com%7C56beda3f5ea54d6a325108dd81096a0e%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638808599620222272%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=hZjqoiWvGxZ5bzlxu6PIwFDwIxDZ5JEgkFsk17LF%2FoM%3D&reserved=0<https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-18> Best Regards, John
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