Antonio did you sample Platform for this??

The break (beat) is cool...

but the melody is straight off a recent hip hop track...

I don't know...how I feel...keep at it...

the part right before the break cuts off unnaturally...
what's your setup?

Ultimately my constructive criticism is that it sounds to loopy...the
atmospherics need to expand...could probably use some nice long pads...or
some more sounds that are not looped

World Renowned



-----Original Message-----
From: Antonio Sexton [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]]
Sent: Monday, April 22, 2002 5:07 PM
To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List
Subject: [dnb-prod] Re: DnB on a Phunky Tip! Brand new track-Comments
appreciated


Thanks, Jurgen...

It still a work in progress...and you are right I was
going to add little reverb...and maybe some quick
in-and-out filtering for the drums only.

I still think it needs an intro/outro with maybe a
different bassline and possibly add a little more
compression to them drums...

And as far as style...i tried to do something
different than your ev'day thing...still workin' on it
tho :)

Thanks for your comments...I really appreciate it!

Lemme hear some of your stuff, too!


Antonio


--- Jurgen Baute <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> It's different. That I can say about it :)
>
> Technically I find the drums a bit dry, and not
> sounding strong enough to be played out
> as long as they are at the beginning of the tune.
> They do fit with the rest of the tune however.
> Maybe try some reverb on the drums, see what it
> does.
>
> I can't say much about the rest, besides that it's
> quite different.  It sound like some
> sort of electro-thing in there (I think it's the
> bells).
>
> Not your typical drum'n'bass alright :)
>
> ------------------------
> On 16 Apr 2002 at 0:22, Antonio Sexton wrote:
>
> > Just finished the first draft on this brand new
> > track...Constructive criticism is appreciated!
> >
> > Thanks guys...
> >
> > Check it!
> >
> > http://www.timegates.com/funkyfastlane.mp3
> >
> >
> > L8r,
> > Antonio
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