Exposure:
Main critisisme I have on the track is that:
1. I don't think those vocal samples ("break it", "lockdown"?) fit the track. They
sound
too much like they are slapped on top of things. Maybe some effects or filtering can
fit
them in better.
2. More stuff needs to happen. There are quite some pads, effects and things in
there,
but there needs to be some more variation in them, and a few more IMO.
Maybe you can put some more in the midrange (lots of high end action already as you
stated yourself).
It sounds a bit highend indeed, but that might be easy to fix to lower the pitch on
certain things, like the snares, or some extra midrange effects.
So many possibilities:
A solid track. A lot more happening here I think, or maybe I'm just being distracted
by
the pornsamples you put in there ;)
A few things I did notice inbetween Jenna's moaning is that I think the track needs
more
subbass. The bassline sounds good, but it needs that extra punch.
Or like the D would say, "I prefer to feel it in my chest than to not feel it"
Also on a minor tip, that little voice that loops on and on (can't tell what it's
saying)
should be pushed back in the mix I think. Right now it just grabs too much attention,
and starts to irritate after a while.
Soma:
Nice track. A jazzy tip with a darkish bassline on it, and that drop in the middle
where
the bassline speeds up, nice, reminds me of some tracks on Grooveriders "Mysteries of
Funk".
I think I like this one the best actually. Keep up the good work :)
What are you using to produce btw?
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On 19 Jul 2002 at 9:13, SLIDE www.mp3.com/_slide_ wrote:
> list,
>
> Easy everyone. Can anyone with some free time on their hands please check out my
>tunes and
> tell me what they think? I've recently uploaded them and am looking for feedback.
>The link
> is www.mp3.com/_slide_ The tune called exposure is a different mix to the one i have
> settled for as i think the one one there has far to much high end on it, but see
>what u
> reckon. I've uploaded a better mix of it and am waiting for it to be approved. There
>are
> also a load of other ones i've uploaded that haven't gone on yet, but please check
>out
> whats there.
>
> thanks for listening
>
> slide aka slidesystem
>
> www.adnb.co.uk/slide.html
> www.bluestrobe.com
> www.mp3.com/_slide_
>
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