Since it's already of the ambient/pretty variety why don't you add some twinkly bells as an accent or even an actual melody. Would round it out a bit EQ wise. Try playing something that pulses or hits on quarter or eighth notes. These rhythms are not really represented in your track and could fill it up a bit.

Also, the "melody" part you start with should just drop out all together at some point. Then that pad sound in there should keep floating along with the sub and then paint something entirely new for the listener that will go along with it.

This could be a problem if your sample is complex. EQing might not get it. It sound like a phase piano tinkling over a nice warm pad. Perhaps you could re-create the sample so that you can make the parts sound separately and cleanly. Having your track based around one "complex" sample makes it sort of hard to "break down", no?

Try soloing just one track, any track, and then play or find something to accompany it. Even if it sounds completely different to you. Add as much as you can around the one soloed part and then




At 18:21 -0500 12/9/02, kevinacameron wrote:
well you need to add something when you take it out, like a beepy synth line
or something...
and instead of taking it out completly, just try to add a lowpass filter on
it or something...

-----Original Message-----
From: Vince Royer [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]]
Sent: Monday, December 09, 2002 2:40 PM
To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List
Subject: [dnb-prod] RE: Why You Get Stuck :)


I guess this is a reply to my post about being stuck.  It's very
informative, and I welcome the tips.  However, it pretty much completely
sidetracks what I was getting at with my post.  I have listened and broken
down tons of tracks, and I now understand how things are put together.
That's not really what I was having problems with.

I see not very many people actually listened to the track I posted.   I have
a melody which is an obvious sample I grabbed from somewhere.  I really like
the sample and the way it sits with a drumnbass break.  I put it through a
phaser and it made me happy.   I laid some nice drums over it, half snabbed
out of a break, and half my own creation.   I think it sounds great.

The problem is that I've tried laying a bassline under it, but it just
sounds horrible. So I just beefed up the bassdrums and I'm happy with that.

So I've got my main theme, some nice percussion, but I'm just having trouble
with the variation.  I think it sounds really good, but if the whole track
sounds like this it's gonna get boring.   Should I fill it out with samples
here and there?  I find if I stop the main riff, the whole song sounds like
it just dissapears.  Must be because it's a pretty complex sample.   It has
a melody laid on top of a stringy landscape.  I wish I could stop the melody
for a few bars and just keep the strings and the drums, but it's one sample
so I can't seperate it.

If you guys could please just listen to it and tell me what you think!

http://members.shaw.ca/vinister/Vinister-MonteCarloRMX.mp3

Thanks
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