this sounds really nice!! your bass sounds are wicked here.
drums sound nice and clean. i can't want to hear it with the drum
turnarounds and whatnot although even without them it sounds good.

My critique of this tune:

- it sounds really fast (but then, i write tunes at 170 so that speed is
stuck in my head so i couldn't technically consider this a legitimate gripe)
- the drop didn't particularly grab me (not much dramatic effect)
- gets repetitive around 4 minutes because there aren't many different parts
to the song

the overall energy level remains the same, i think it would sound better if
there was more of a build up to the bass stuff. IMO you could get away with
the repetition if you used a more varied palate of timbres and changed the
melody of your pads. other melodic elements would hlep as well.

but anyway. take that all with a grain of salt. ultimately I liked it. :)

~Andy

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Josh Steiner [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 05, 2003 1:08 PM
> To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List
> Subject: [dnb-prod] wooh haaaa, got a new tune for your listening
> pleasure
>
>
> hey hey, just got this new tune in a mostly-finished state, i'd love to
> hear your opinions before i dig back into it for the final mixdown:
>
> http://vitriolix.com/tunes/Vitriolix_-_2_Much.mp3
>
> i am *most pleased* with the bass on this tune :)
>
> anyhow, i've got a short todo left for this one before i call it "done"
> ... mostly i need to make a couple new drum turnarounds and i wanted to
> come up with a few new hat patterns to pull in and out to keep the drums
> varied... but the big one is that i'm busy digging around for some
> suitable kung fu samples, but i'm having terrible luck... if you guys
> have any pointers to any good kung fu sound efx sample cd's or web
> sites, i'd love the info.
>
> later,
>
> -josh
>
> btw, my "whistler" tune is slightly more complete now, i'll
> probably finish it one of these days but i consider it mostly a
> joke tune so its not high on my priority list:
>
http://vitriolix.com/vitriolix_-_whistler_%28barely_started_2003.02.17%29.mp
3

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