I've been doing a final nits review of the DPS framework document while doing the proto write-up.
There is nothing major - mainly typos/missing commas and minor change of wording: these I've passed to editors directly. The only significant issue is the definition of "relying parties" in 1.1 either "users of the DNS" (at the beginning of the section) or "all entities relying on signed responses from the DNS" (at the end, and in the glossary). This needs clarification as "relying party" is used in the middle of that section. Stephen _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
