On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM, Ólafur Guðmundsson <ola...@cloudflare.com> wrote:
> > Dear colleagues, > a new version of the document has been posted that fixes few minor > grammatical and spelling errors. > > this is version 02 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/ > Htmlized: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02 > Diff: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02 > > Olafur > > On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 6:29 PM, Tim Wicinski <tjw.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds >> >> Current versions of the draft is available here: >> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/ >> >> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments. Also, if someone >> feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak out with >> your reasons. >> >> Feel free to show up at DNSOP's Wednesday session and voice your approval >> or disapproval. >> >> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on >> 17 April 2016 >> >> thanks >> tim >> >> Looks good to me. One more typo: 5. Security considerations -- end of last sentence: "after a certain about of wait time - thus allowing a child administrator to cancel the request." "about" should be "amount"
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