On Wed, Mar 21, 2018 at 08:17:08PM -0400, Matthew Pounsett wrote: > Congratulations on an extremely short, to the point draft. I think that's > the shortest I've ever read.
Indeed! I hesitate to offer trivial rephrasing suggestions because it might represent such a significant percentage of the final text you'd have to give me co-author credit. :) That said, however, "No response...means" is ambiguous: it could be read as "[there is] no response [which] means". So I suggest rephrasaing section 2 as: The failure of a server to respond in any way to repeateded DNS queries containing EDNS OPT records indicates that the server is not a DNS responder. The querier MUST treat this server as nonresponsive, and MUST NOT retry queries without EDNS. Or something like that. -- Evan Hunt -- e...@isc.org Internet Systems Consortium, Inc. _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
