Due to its nature, the document is a bit difficult to read, but I don't
have any suggestion about how to make it better. The only problem I have
with the document is that there are lots of informational references
that are not referred to in the body of the text; they are not even
listed in the Updates list at the top of the document. This should
either be explained clearly in the body of the document or removed.
--Paul Hoffman
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