On Thu, Apr 9, 2020 at 9:23 AM Robert Wilton via Datatracker <
nore...@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> My lack of domain knowledge made this document hard for me to understand,
> but
> given that this document as aimed at folks deploying DNS servers I don't
> really
> see that as a problem.
>

Thank you for your review Robert.

One note is that the draft does use quite a few acronyms and has no
> terminology
> section.  I'm not suggesting adding a terminology section but perhaps in
> the
> introduction it would be worth adding a sentence to point readers to  RFC
> 8499/BCP 219?  This should probably also be listed as an informative
> dependency
> (assuming that the terms used are formally defined elsewhere).
>

That's a good suggestion. We can certainly mention RF8499. Another thing
that might
be helpful is to go through the doc and, where it makes sense, expand some
of the
acronyms/abbreviations on first use.

Shumon Huque
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