On 4 Jul 2023, at 10:03, Peter Thomassen wrote: > Hi Scott, > > Thank you very much for your feedback -- responses inline. > o "inline" the actual definition, but that was just a feeling.) > >> Also, “Signaling Name” sounds >> confusing compared to the Signaling Domain. Would it be easier to write it >> as: >> >> “Signaling Name The owner name of comprised of a prefix, the Child zone name >> and the Signaling domain name. Used by the Parental Agent to identify and >> retrieve the Signaling Type used by the Child zone (See Section 2.2). “ >> >> To stress it is a name in the Signaling Domain, but contains the child zone >> name. > > Coming up with this terminology was really challenging. The reason that the > Signaling Name is only the prefix, without the Signaling Domain, is that it > makes the rest of the spec easier. For example, from Section 3.1: > > To [...] > authenticate the Child's CDS/CDNSKEY RRsets, the Child DNS Operator > MUST co-publish them at the corresponding Signaling Name under each > out-of-bailiwick Signaling Domain [...] > > With your definition, one would have to say > > To [...] > authenticate the Child's CDS/CDNSKEY RRsets, the Child DNS Operator > MUST co-publish them at each corresponding out-of-bailiwick Signaling > Name [...] > > Do you feel that's an improvement? >
I honestly don’t have a good solution so maybe the original wording is best. I was thinking maybe changing it to “Signaling Name Prefix” but that isn’t an improvement either. I would be fine in leaving the text as-is since there doesn’t seem to be a better wording that is apparent. The rest of the doc is clear as to how the name is formed and used and that is the important part. I am fine with the other changes. I can update the review to “Ready” to finalize things for this version. Scott > > Thanks, > Peter > > -- > https://desec.io/ ================================== Scott Rose NIST/CTL scott.r...@nist.gov ph: +1-301-975-8439 (w) +1-571-249-3761 (GoogleVoice) ================================== _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop