Hi Roman, Thank you for your review.
Incorporated changes will show up in the -09 revision (will be published later today) and are part of this PR: https://github.com/desec-io/draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping/pull/15 Details below. On 5/12/24 23:43, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker wrote:
---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you to Peter Yee for the GENART review. ** Section 6. Editorial. The level of rigor in Section 4.2 is needed to prevent publication of a half-baked DS RRset Is “half-baked DS RRset” a term-of-art? To improve readability, I recommend not using an idiomatic expression.
Replaced with "ill-conceived".
** Section 7. Editorial. Per the reference to [draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping], this should likely be something like “[This RFC]” and subsequent comment of that string being replaced by the RFC Editor.
Done.
** idnits reports: ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8499 (Obsoleted by RFC 9499)
Done. Best, Peter -- https://desec.io/ _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list -- dnsop@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to dnsop-le...@ietf.org