At 01:36 AM 05/20/02 +0800, Stas Bekman wrote:
>Allan is on move, so he has asked me to upload his new preview. This 
>time only a single page. Please help and have a look at this url:
>http://perl.apache.org/preview/allan-test/1.html
>
>Allan needs to know only these things:
>
>1) does the page renders overall ok (ie, there should not be any obvious
>errors) ?

No problems for me.  

NS4.08, Opera, Mozilla, IE -- win98
Galeon, Mozill, K on Linux

>2) do you have a horizontal scrollbar ?
>2b) if so, does the current cvs preview also have a horizontal scrollbar 
>of download/binaries.html?

No horizontal scroll bar, but the page doesn't have any source code that
might make it extend.

>3) does these at the top of the page right-align almost perfectly?
>              camel-image
>      prev|up|next widget
>               title-line
>               pdf-widget

Yes.

>
>3b) is the right-margin at the top almost the same at the bottom widget?
>      prev|up|next widget

yes.

>4) the "camel-line", does it float correctly with the curve next to the 
>logo? (is it obviously floating in-correctly)

Yes


>5) ns4.08. this is to bill mostly it seems. im pretty sure i have found 
>the bug that causes this browser to crash. it is in the anchor tags. 
>please check if your ns4.08 crashes the above url, even if clearing the 
>cache or not.

Seems to work.  Cool!


>6) pleae note if strange colours appear strange places - i have added 
>various colours in the stylesheet to be able to validate it 100%

Looks good

>7) please check the search box at the left - does it look ok with no 
>extra white space?

Looks good

But, we need more white space between the top nav widget and the title
text.  If the title is long or the screen is narrow the title it cramped
between the widgets.  

Personally (and because I designed it ;) I like the current /release header
design better.  More white space and thicker line define the title really
well.  And the symmetry (of design) of the [prev][up][next] and the [pdf]
around the title bugs me a bit.  By having them the same design (the box)
ties them together, which is probably the design idea, but that also seems
to turn the title into a single block.  I think the title should stand more
on its own.

Have I mentioned that I like white space? ;)

-- 
Bill Moseley
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