Mike Gerdts wrote:
> 
> I believe that I have incorporated all of the feedback given
> (thanks!).  Changes since the 2008-11-16 version include:
> 
> - ksh style & coding standards compliance in test script (Roland)
> - "dof_init_debug == B_FALSE" vs. "!dof_init_debug" (Adam)
> 
> The updated webrev is at:
> 
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~mgerdts/6750659-2008-12-03/

Quick review (patch code is quoted with "> "):
-- snip --
[snip]
> +
> +PATH=/usr/bin:/usr/sbin:$PATH

Is "export" not needed in this case, e.g. shouldn't subprocesses inherit
PATH, too ?

> +if (( $# != 1 )); then
> +       print -u2 'expected one argument: <dtrace-path>'
> +       exit 2
> +fi
> +
> +#
> +# jdtrace does not implement the -h option that is required to generate
> +# C header files.
> +#
> +if [[ "$1" == */jdtrace ]]; then
> +       exit 0

Is the zero return code (= "suceess") Ok in this case ?

> +fi
> +
> +dtrace="$1"
> +startdir="$PWD"
> +dir=$(mktemp -td drtiXXXXXX)
> +if (( $? != 0 )); then
> +       print -u2 'Could not create safe temporary directory'
> +       exit 2
> +fi
> +
> +cd "$dir"
> +
> +cat > Makefile <<EOF
> +all: main
> +
> +main: main.o prov.o
> +       \$(CC) -o main main.o prov.o
> +
> +main.o: main.c prov.h
> +       \$(CC) -c main.c
> +
> +prov.h: prov.d
> +       $dtrace -h -s prov.d
> +
> +prov.o: prov.d main.o
> +       $dtrace -G -32 -s prov.d main.o
> +EOF
> +
> +cat > prov.d <<EOF
> +provider tester {
> +       probe entry();
> +};
> +EOF
> +
> +cat > main.c <<EOF
> +#include <stdlib.h>
> +#include <sys/sdt.h>
> +#include "prov.h"
> +
> +int
> +main(int argc, char **argv, char **envp)
> +{
> +       envp[0] = (char*)0xff;
> +       TESTER_ENTRY();
> +       return 0;

ISO C defines |EXIT_SUCCESS| (it's defined as |#define EXIT_SUCCESS
(0)|) ... I don't know whether it's better or worse in this case...

> +}
> +EOF
> +
> +make > /dev/null
> +status=$?
> +if (( $status != 0 )) ; then

Umpf... please remove the extra '$' - see
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/shell/shellstyle/#avoid_unneccesary_string_number_conversions
-- snip --

The remaining stuff looks good... :-)

----

Bye,
Roland

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