Ben Siraphob <[email protected]> writes: > This patch fixes various typos and grammatical issues throughout the > Org manual.
Thank you! The changes are great. > -| =($3-32)*5/9= | Degrees F \to C conversion | > -| =$c/$1/$cm= | Hz \to cm conversion, using =constants.el= | > +| =($3-32)*5/9= | Fahrenheit to Celsius conversion | > +| =$c/$1/$cm= | Hz \to cm conversion, using =constants.el= | We should either stick to `\to' or to "to". > [...] Customize the variable ~org-log-into-drawer~ to > -get this behavior---the recommended drawer for this is called > +get this behavior---the recommended drawer for this to be called > =LOGBOOK= [...] This is not grammatical, unlike the original, no? > -must all be strictly inferior to 65. > +must all be strictly less than 65. We can simplify to "must all be less than 65". No need for the word "strictly". [The word "strictly" would have been necessary if there was a sequence where each element must be greater than the previous one, in which case we would say that the sequence is "strictly increasing".] > -Boolean logic like =+boss+urgent-project1=, to find entries with tags > +Boolean logic ...like =+boss+urgent-project1= (to find entries with I am not sure "...like" is an improvement. How about something more standard: "Boolean logic, such as =+boss+urgent-project1=" "Boolean logic, like =+boss+urgent-project1=" > @@ -22978,7 +22979,7 @@ Since the first release, literally thousands While on it, we can drop the word "literally" here. > -here a list of the people who had significant influence in shaping one > +a list here of the people who had significant influence in shaping one How about a simple "Below is a list of the people [...]" Rudy -- "I have only made this letter longer because I have not had the time to make it shorter." --- Blaise Pascal, The Provincial Letters, 1657 Rudolf Adamkovič <[email protected]> [he/him] http://adamkovic.org
