The list in section 4.2.1 "General TLV Format" includes:
   11 PAC TLV (DEPRECATED)

I suggest re-adding the subsection for PAC TLV with a brief note that it's
deprecated. This would serve as reminder that TLV number 11 did exist and
it would also keep the section numbering unchanged making it easier to
compare RFC 7170 and its updated version. This is a purely an editorial
idea.


Section 7.7. "Security Claims":
When the draft source is processed, incorrect renumbering happens. First,
see this line

https://github.com/emu-wg/rfc7170bis/blob/main/draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis.md?plain=1#L3363
Then compare it to the processed HTML version.
    https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-emu-rfc7170bis-12.html

Updating the draft source file from '2.' to 'Note 2.", and similarly for
note 1, likely fixes this.


Appendix A.4. and A.5. both say that TLS_RSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA is a
mandatory ciphersuite and then refer to section 3.2. for more information.
Section 3.2. has the updated information but A.4. and A.5. still have old
RFC 7170 ciphersuite.


Example flows C.11., C.12. and C.13. are not named.

-- 
Heikki Vatiainen
h...@radiatorsoftware.com
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