Homework on Monday and Tuesday is switched...Read/revise "Control" for Monday and read "The Trouble With Fries" for Tuesday. Also, bring the revised copies of your essay to class on Tuesday for peer editing.
For the essay, don't interject your opinion; step back and keep your personal views out, except for in the conclusion. Cite your sources, the Writer's Handbook shows MLA guidelines. Discussed journal entries. Be sure not to simply summarize in journals, but rather write your personal reaction to what you read. Words/phrases summarizing our journals about Gibson (Paintball essay): -healthy?? -transition from fun to serious -glorifies violence -obsession -escaping reality -control - imagination -people (men?) need war -innocence (return to) -vets -exhileration
