Craig What did you think about my paper? What improvements could be made? I saw i still had a few grammatical mistakes and i apologize about that. Also i read over the peer critiques and im a little confused...you sugessted that i present both sides of the arguements, and i think i did a good job of that, so did many other people...BUT some said i need to better define which side i stand for...do i need to pick a side? This isnt an arguing kinda paper i didnt feel the need to but please let me know what will improve this paper...also someone else wrote to me "what argument is michelle trying to make? how can i work on that, again am i trying to make an arguement??? That same person said that i gave both sides for the paper but he was not convinced because he felt there was nothing to be convinced of, while another person said my paper was very convincing and made her see how video games could be good for children, a few others felt the same way as her... Please let me know, if this is really confusing i can re write it to you, im just looking at what i highlighted from hte responces and writing you my questions, please let me know asap...thanks! michelle
--On Wednesday, February 27, 2002 7:20 PM -0500 Craig Butz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > This article connects with today's discussion: > > http://www.cnn.com/2002/TECH/02/27/hooligans.asia/index.html > > Craig >
