That's pretty hot. Not gonna lie.

My only suggestions:

1) "development snapshot,<BREAK> Oct 19, 2008" looks _very_ awkward to  
me when it's broken up over two lines, with the date below the rest.  
It's that trailing comma.  Perhaps "development snapshot<BREAK>(Oct  
19, 2008)".

2) I feel like the left column is missing a heading on top.  I guess  
it's a weight issue. The first three items are treated as top-level  
links, while everything else on the same page with the same style is  
treated as second-level navigation. Either those first three items  
should have increased weight (to show they're top-level) or a heading  
should be added (to make their style consistent with the rest of the  
page).

So basically, these are very nit-picky issues that I, a non-designer,  
have, and can probably be ignored. But those are my thoughts.

On Jan 1, 2009, at 8:20 AM, Dmitrii Dimandt wrote:

>
> My feeble attempt at subj:
>
> http://files.dmitriid.com/erlyweb/index.html
>
> The source can be downloaded here:
> http://files.dmitriid.com/erlyweb/site.zip
>
>
> Notes:
> - development snapshot can simply lead to github. e date is the date  
> of the
> latest github commit
> - documentation should not point to the docs themselves, but to a  
> separate
> page that should contain links to tutorials and erlyweb reference
>
> What say ye?
>
> :)
>
> >


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