--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, "ShempMcGurk" <shempmcg...@...> wrote: > > You asked for any ideas for improvement on the article. Here's one: > > Unless this article is only intended for the already-converted (ie., TM true > believers), lay off on the "perfect health" claims. > > Qualify your cult-addled statements, as I demonstrate above, or else no one > in the real world will take you seriously. >
Yeah, reads pretty slow and mind numbing even for conservative meditators. Could make outsiders wonder if this experience of reading it is spiritually anything like TM transcendence? Who are they writing this for? A public webpage?
