I read that first draft you sent out. Here is my feedback: 1. Nice photoshop job on the front cover, substituting your face for Buddha's on that statue. 2. Pages should be numbered sequentially, unless you are looking to intentionally confuse your readers. 3. References, references, references. You oughta cite your sources to be credible. 4. Finally, five pages total length is just too short to be considered for a book. Especially written in crayon.
--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Vaj <vajradh...@...> wrote: > > > On Dec 30, 2010, at 9:37 AM, tartbrain wrote: > > > > > --- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Vaj <vajradhatu@> wrote: > > > > > > > > > On Dec 29, 2010, at 7:52 PM, RoryGoff wrote: > > > > > > > > Oops. Here's the disclaimer: > > > > > > > > > > Real experts don't count. > > > > > > > > > > Caveat emptor. > > > > > > > > Let me guess. You're not a real expert, but you are absolutely > > > > certain you know some people who are. Right? > > > > > > > > > I guess you'll have to wait till my Spiritual Autobiography is > > released. > > > > > > > Autobiography of a Vagi? > > The Way of the Vaj I. >
