Mola, I like your concept, but would suggest you reexamine the following elements: 1) The shadow behind the fedora logo gives a little more depth to the rest of the beam than you probably want, making it come off almost doughnut-like. 2) The opaque white of the end of the beam reads a little more moon-like than like light, especially given your much softer treatment of the beam's path until that point. Perhaps you mean to be shining at the moon, but I would contend that that confuses the image a bit if that's the case. I could see having a solid white light beam or one with a low alpha, but the mix is where you run into problems. 3) Do you need the white halo around the fedora logo? Have you tried nixing the halo and treating the fedora logo as if that were the only light? That may not look as good, I'm not sure, but perhaps it's worth a shot.
All and all, a very pretty concept with a promising first or second pass at it. To be honest though, of all the ones you've posted so far, the one you did in blender ( http://molaora.com/data/files/Temp/security_spin_001.jpg ) is my favorite by far. That one is really fabulous. Great work, eve On Thu, 2008-09-11 at 22:53 +0430, Mola Pahnadayan wrote: > Hi, > Another wallpaper :) > http://molaora.com/index.php?photos/album/8/photo/61.html > with inkscape > call for security like batman call. > > Mola. > > Huzaifa Sidhpurwala wrote: > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > > Hash: SHA1 > > > > Hi All, > > I just added a request for a Wall paper for Fedora Security spin, > > Just wanted to drop a line to you guys to let you know. > > Thanks a lot. > > > > > > - -- > > Regards, > > Huzaifa Sidhpurwala, RHCE, CCNA (IRC: huzaifas) > > Research and Development Lead, > > Global Help Desk, Pune > > Phone: +91 20 4005 7322 (UTC +5.5) > > > > GnuPG Fingerprint: > > 3A0F DAFB 9279 02ED 273B FFE9 CC70 DCF2 DA5B DAE5 > > > > Visit the Help Desk portal at : http://helpdesk.corp.redhat.com > > > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- > > Version: GnuPG v1.4.5 (GNU/Linux) > > Comment: Using GnuPG with Red Hat - http://enigmail.mozdev.org > > > > iD8DBQFIxhOdzHDc8tpb2uURAslFAKCZ/4R7IyUKM0aaUB9KdnUUuDU4WACdEZzZ > > KGf53I8JAKQ4JuLm+Qv4OCQ= > > =ObEI > > -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora-art-list mailing list > > Fedora-art-list@redhat.com > > http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora-art-list mailing list > Fedora-art-list@redhat.com > http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
