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--- Comment #1 from Lubomir Rintel <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  2008-09-11 11:27:25 EDT 
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Looks very well.

Please remove the leading blank line in %description, I am not sure it would
look well in GUI tools. Description probably needs some more love -- the fact
that the package is free doesn't need to be mentioned there (redundant, see
License tag) and "X windows" is correctly spelled without the trailing "s" and
with "w" capitablized: "X Window", "X Window System", or just "X11".

It's not clear what does this line do, and why does it belong to %prep. Please
explain and add a comment:
make -f Makefile.cvs dist

What's "%{_datadir}/apps"? Would not "%{_datadir}/raytracer" be more
appropriate? In case not, please ensure you depend on the package that creates
it or own it.
%{_datadir}/apps/raytracer/

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