skychan wrote: > Wow, I'm impressed, a Bleach crossover I actually like. Normaly through no > fault of Bleach itself I cant stand the crossovers. Mine is the first I have encountered. :) > You however have > intrigued me. I think that Cologne was a bit too forthwright about it, and > Happy a bit too clear. It might have been better if it was not in fact just > some amazon technique but rather that she helps Ranma translate Happy's > writing. She can still pass on all the information but it seems less likely > that she would give help to keep him from killing himself over one of Happys > techniques than give away the village's knowledge for free. You might even > have her require him to let her copy or have happosai's original scroll for > her help. > These are good points, and I shall make a note of them for the final version.
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