IS it just me or has the actual fic have yet to hit the list? Jimu RetroGuru, the Player To Be Named Later.
>From: skychan <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >Reply-To: The Fanfiction Mailing List <[email protected]> >To: "The Fanfiction Mailing List" <[email protected]> >Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Thy Outward Part] Faces >Date: Thu, 9 Aug 2007 12:24:14 -0600 > >You forgot to run it through a spell checker and there are a few grammar >errors as well but its a very good story. I was wondering for a moment if >you were going to have poor Yoko fall for Ranma at the end drawing it >outwhile she tried to find a new place. And while I do like the current >ending you could write a great Omake about her snagging Ranma rather than >Keitaro after his curse is fully cured. > >As for writing notes I have to agree with Jorge Pratt, she was just a >little >TOO poilite and perfect even for attempting to act that way once meeting >Ranma for training. Its okay for her to be that way but I would expect to >see some more internal grumbling than we do. As for later I also missed >the >drop off of her internal monologues and agree that a little bit more could >be bennificial, even if they are only highlighting her concerns, both for >Ranma, and at the same time her concerns for catching her husband. I don't >think its unreasonable for her to be thinking both at once. >-------------- next part -------------- >An HTML attachment was scrubbed... >URL: >http://www.chez-vrolet.net/pipermail/ffml/attachments/20070809/e144c558/attachment.htm > >--- > .-------Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List--------. > | Administrators - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | > | Unsubscribing - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | > | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | > `------------ FAQ URL coming soon.... -------------' _________________________________________________________________ Learn.Laugh.Share. Reallivemoms is right place! http://www.reallivemoms.com?ocid=TXT_TAGHM&loc=us --- .-------Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List--------. | Administrators - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Unsubscribing - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `------------ FAQ URL coming soon.... -------------'
